Gen-ART LC review of draft-merkle-tls-brainpool-02
"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Sun, 30 June 2013 06:46 UTC
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From: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>
To: draft-merkle-tls-brainpool.all@tools.ietf.org
Subject: Gen-ART LC review of draft-merkle-tls-brainpool-02
Date: Sun, 30 Jun 2013 09:44:45 +0300
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-merkle-tls-brainpool-02 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2013-6-30 IETF LC End Date: 2013-7-23 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is almost ready for publication as Standard track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: In section 1 you reference TLS 1.0 and 1.1 usage based on RFC 4492. What about TLS 1.2 usage specified in RFC5246 A.7 Nits/editorial comments: 1. In section 3 the registry name is EC Named Curve 2. In section 3 change "suitability" to "suitable"
- Gen-ART LC review of draft-merkle-tls-brainpool-02 Roni Even
- Re: Gen-ART LC review of draft-merkle-tls-brainpo… Johannes Merkle