Gen-ART LC Review of draft-freed-sieve-date-index-11

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Document: draft-freed-sieve-date-index-11
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date:  2008-05-23
IETF LC End Date: 2008-05-28
IESG Telechat date: (if known)

Summary:

This document is basically ready for publication as a draft standard.  
I have a few minor comments which I consider optional to address.

Comments:

Section 4:

Does it make sense to add a reference for ":is" and "i;ascii-casemap"?

Can you mention the reason that the date test can only apply to one  
header field at a time?

Last paragraph, last sentence: "... the last one that appears should  
be used."

Is that a normative SHOULD?

Section 4.1, time-zone syntax:

I assume the 4 digits are hhmm, as mentioned later in the discussion  
of default time zone. It might help to explicitly state that in this  
section.

Section 6.1, section title:

Section title is "Examples", but I only see one example :-)

Thanks!

Ben.

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