Re: [Int-area] I-D Action: draft-ietf-intarea-nat-reveal-analysis-07.txt

<mohamed.boucadair@orange.com> Wed, 10 April 2013 11:20 UTC

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Dear all,

This version integrates the first set of comments received during the IESG review. The main changes are:

* Add a sentence to clarify why no recommendation is included
* Add a sentence to clarify a host can be any computer located behind a CPE or directly connected to an address-sharing function
* Remove Section 1.1 and dispatch the bullets in the core text of Section 3
* Add a sentence to the privacy section to say an address-sharing function can be configured with different end-users policies
* Clarify what is meant by "encrypted traffic" in Table 1
* Add a sentence to the privacy section to request specification document to check whether location information may/may not be exposed using HOST_ID solutions
* Add a new items for the TCP option to mention it may interfere with the use of Fast Open extension
* Add some pointers to behave documents.
* Other minor edits.

Cheers,
Med

>-----Message d'origine-----
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>Objet : [Int-area] I-D Action: draft-ietf-intarea-nat-reveal-analysis-
>07.txt
>
>
>A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Internet Area Working Group Working Group
>of the IETF.
>
>	Title           : Analysis of Solution Candidates to Reveal a Host
>Identifier (HOST_ID) in Shared Address Deployments
>	Author(s)       : Mohamed Boucadair
>                          Joe Touch
>                          Pierre Levis
>                          Reinaldo Penno
>	Filename        : draft-ietf-intarea-nat-reveal-analysis-07.txt
>	Pages           : 22
>	Date            : 2013-04-10
>
>Abstract:
>   This document is a collection of solutions to reveal a host
>   identifier (denoted as HOST_ID) when a Carrier Grade NAT (CGN) or
>   application proxies are involved in the path.  This host identifier
>   could be used by a remote server to sort out the packets by sending
>   host.  The host identifier must be unique to each host under the same
>   shared IP address.
>
>   This document analyzes a set of solution candidates to reveal a host
>   identifier; no recommendation is sketched in the document.
>
>
>The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-intarea-nat-reveal-analysis
>
>There's also a htmlized version available at:
>http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-intarea-nat-reveal-analysis-07
>
>A diff from the previous version is available at:
>http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-intarea-nat-reveal-analysis-07
>
>
>Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
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