Re: [Int-dir] Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast-12
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To: Zhen Cao <zhencao.ietf@gmail.com>, "draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast@tools.ietf.org>
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Dear Zhen, Thank you for the review. Please see inline. Cheers, Med > -----Message d'origine----- > De : Zhen Cao [mailto:zhencao.ietf@gmail.com] > Envoyé : lundi 12 décembre 2016 07:01 > À : draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast@tools.ietf.org > Cc : int-ads@ietf.org; int-dir@ietf.org > Objet : Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-multicast-12 > > Hi, authors and editors, > > I am an assigned INT directorate reviewer for this draft. These > comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Internet Area > Directors. Document editors and shepherds should treat these comments > just like they would treat comments from any other IETF contributors > and resolve them along with any other Last Call comments that have > been received. For more details of the INT directorate, see > <http://www.ietf.org/iesg/directorate.html>. > > > I do not see any major reason to block the publication of this draft. > Below are two comments for discussion. > > a) uPrefix64 and mPrefix64 > > I was a bit confused when I encounter the name suffix -64, because > they somehow imply only 64-bit long prefix could be used, while the > fact may be not true. [Med] Actually, 64 is not used to denote the prefix length but this is a practice widely used in transition mechanisms, you can see for instance: https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6146 https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc6147 https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7050 https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7225 ... If '64' means an IPv6-IPv4 mapping, it may make > some sense. So I highly encourage the editors to put some notes below > the items in the terminology section. > [Med] Makes sense. I added a note similar note that we have in https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-softwire-multicast-prefix-option-11: Note: "64" is used as an abbreviation for IPv6-IPv4 interconnection. > > b) > 6.2. Multicast Data Forwarding > > When the mB4 receives an IPv6 multicast packet, it MUST check the > group address and the source address. If the IPv6 multicast group > prefix is mPrefix64 and the IPv6 source prefix is uPrefix64, the mB4 > MUST decapsulate the IPv6 header and forward the IPv4 multicast > packet through each relevant interface. Otherwise, the mB4 MUST > silently drop the packet. > > comments: the mB4 not only needs to check the validity of mPrefix and > uPrefix, but also needs to check if there exists an associated > MLD/IGMP requests from that prefixes. Only if there was an IGMP > report associted with this transaction, it will forward such multicast > packets. > > [Med] This is actually the intent of the last part of the text you quoted: prefix is mPrefix64 and the IPv6 source prefix is uPrefix64, the mB4 MUST decapsulate the IPv6 header and forward the IPv4 multicast packet through each relevant interface. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ If no state is found, there won't be any "relevant interface". So the traffic won't be forwarded. > Thanks for draft the document. > > -zhen
- [Int-dir] Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwire-d… Zhen Cao
- Re: [Int-dir] Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwi… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Int-dir] Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwi… Zhen Cao
- Re: [Int-dir] Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwi… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Int-dir] Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwi… Tim Chown
- Re: [Int-dir] Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwi… Lee, Yiu
- Re: [Int-dir] Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwi… mohamed.boucadair
- Re: [Int-dir] Int-Dir Review of draft-ietf-softwi… Lee, Yiu