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From: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>
To: Ines Robles <mariainesrobles@googlemail.com>
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Thank you Ines for your review.

As you may have noticed, I used your review in my last week ballot on this document

Regards

-éric

-----Original Message-----
From: Ines Robles via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
Reply-To: Ines Robles <mariainesrobles@googlemail.com>
Date: Tuesday, 20 October 2020 at 23:42
To: "iot-directorate@ietf.org" <iot-directorate@ietf.org>
Cc: "last-call@ietf.org" <last-call@ietf.org>, "lwip@ietf.org" <lwip@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks.all@ietf.org>
Subject: Iotdir telechat review of draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks-11
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Resent-Date: Tuesday, 20 October 2020 at 23:42

    Reviewer: Ines Robles
    Review result: Ready

    Document: draft-ietf-lwig-tcp-constrained-node-networks-11
    Reviewer: Ines Robles
    Review Date: 2020-10-20

    Summary:

    This document provides guidance on how to implement and use the Transmission
    Control Protocol (TCP) in Constrained-Node Networks  (CNNs), which are a
    characterstic of the Internet of Things (IoT).

    The document is clear to understand.

    Major Issues: None

    Minor Issues: None.

    Nits:
    1- Should section 2 "Conventions used in this document" be removed? I have not
    found Normative language into the document 2- Questions: Following my
    understanding, the transport features provided by TCP [RFC 8095 - Section
    3.1.3] are covered in this document, right? or there some of the mentioned
    features that does not apply to CNN?

    Thank you for this document,

    Ines

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