Re: [Iot-directorate] Iotdir last call review of draft-ietf-drip-arch-22

mohamed.boucadair@orange.com Mon, 28 March 2022 06:48 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Iot-directorate] Iotdir last call review of draft-ietf-drip-arch-22
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Hi Thomas, all,

Thank for the review. 

Will focus on the issue listed below and kindly invite the authors to reply to the other points in a timely manner.

We went for informational rather than standard as initially advised in the charter because that's the right thing to do for such a document. We don't have valid arguments to motivate why we would put this doc in  the standards track.  

Please note that IETF consensus applies for this document as per RFC8789. 

Cheers,
Med

> -----Message d'origine-----
> De : Thomas Fossati via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
> Envoyé : dimanche 27 mars 2022 19:45
> À : iot-directorate@ietf.org
> Cc : draft-ietf-drip-arch.all@ietf.org; last-call@ietf.org; tm-
> rid@ietf.org
> Objet : Iotdir last call review of draft-ietf-drip-arch-22
> 
> Reviewer: Thomas Fossati
> Review result: Ready with Issues
> 
> This is a great document and fun to read.  Thank you authors!  I have
> tried to highlight a few small things that could be articulated a bit
> more from an IoT perspective but overall I have no major concerns with
> it, except a tangential thing around the document intended status (see
> "Issues" below.)
> 
> # Issues
> 
> * The charter says: "the WG will propose a standard document that
>   describes the architecture […]" but the status is informational.  I am
>   pretty sure informational should be appropriate, but highlighting a
>   potential disconnect.
> 
> 
> 


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