[Iotops] Re: [Last-Call] draft-ietf-iotops-7228bis-07 ietf last call Tsvart review

Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> Tue, 12 May 2026 08:59 UTC

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Hi Marcus,

thank you for your review, and particularly for the concrete, actionable suggestions.

We have prepared (and merged) PRs #19 (clarifying our use of MSL) and #20:

https://github.com/lwig-wg/terminology/pull/19
https://github.com/lwig-wg/terminology/pull/20

You can see the changes in the context of all the IETF last-call related changes at

https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/iddiff?doc_1=draft-ietf-iotops-7228bis&url_2=https://lwig-wg.github.io/terminology/draft-ietf-iotops-7228bis.txt

Of course, IESG processing continues, so any further comments are welcome.

Grüße, Carsten