RE: [Ipoverib] FW: I-D ACTION:draft-strahm-ibconn-mib-00.txt

["Harnedy, Sean" <[e-mail]>]

Bill,
Good job on the IB Connection MIB. Here are my comments:

Comments on draft-strahm-ibconn-mib-00.txt

Page 6:
In IMPORTS section "Gauge32" and "InterfaceIndex FROM IF-MIB" should be
removed (most MIB compilers generate warnings for unused IMPORTS
entries; If we go with the scheme of defining the top level experimental
node in the TC draft, the final IMPORTS entry should be changed to
"infinibandMIB FROM IPOVERIB-TC-MIB; Also, if the TCs on page 7 are
moved to the IPOVERIB TC MIB the proper IMPORTS references would need to
be added; There is an extra set of quotation marks in the ORGANIZATION
construct. Email is not a valid ASN.1 construct; The module identity at
the bottom of page 6 can be changed to "::= { infinibandMIB 2 }" (the WG
needs agree on the numbers we use here). 

Page 7:
Textual conventions can be moved to IPOVERIB-TC-MIB; In Objects it
should be { ibConnMIB 1 } and { ibConnMIB 2 }; the next object
identifier should be "ibConnMIBObjects" (MIB compilers are
case-sensitive).

Page 8:
The "ibConnUDTable" has no columns if the three indexes are used. If
these 3 objects are indexes they should have MAX-ACCESS as
not-accessible. An alternative would be to introduce a table index and
then make the 3 current objects columns in the table. (A table without
columns seems strange: there is nothing to get!!). 

Page 9:
"ibConnMIBObjects" has wrong casing.

Page 10:
Same as Page 8; you have modeled a table with no columns; if this is
true indexes should all have MAX-ACCESS of not-accessible. Again a table
index might be better and move the objects into the columns.

Page 12:
"ibConnMIBObjects" has wrong casing.

Page 13:
Same as 8; indexes should be not-accessible. 

Page 14:
Description for ibConnState should be clearer or made into REFERENCE to
IB documentation.

Thanks,
Sean

Sean Harnedy
Principal Software Engineer
InfiniSwitch Corporation.
134 Flanders Road
Westborough, MA 01581.
1-508-599-6388
http://www.infiniswitch.com

-----Original Message-----
From: Bill Strahm [mailto:[e-mail]]
Sent: Tuesday, October 23, 2001 12:56 PM
To: [e-mail]
Subject: [Ipoverib] FW: I-D ACTION:draft-strahm-ibconn-mib-00.txt


Here is the long delayed Connection MIB (originally named the Channel
Adapter MIB)

Please comment, I want to update this by the Nov 14th Cutoff.

Can I also get positive comments (or negative too) that this should be a
WG
item... Note that short term I am stuck determining Rough Consensus on
this
document, if either Thomas, or Erik (our area directors) would pipe up
and
volunteer either themselves or another volunteer I would REALLY REALLY
REALLY appreciate it.

Bill
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Subject: I-D ACTION:draft-strahm-ibconn-mib-00.txt


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
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	Title		: Infiniband Connection MIB
	Author(s)	: B. Strahm
	Filename	: draft-strahm-ibconn-mib-00.txt
	Pages		: 18
	Date		: 22-Oct-01

This memo defines a portion of the Management Information Base (MIB)
for use with network management protocols in the Internet community.
In particular, it defines objects for managing the InfiniBand
Connection Manager (http://www.infinibandta.org)

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