[ippm] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang-11: (with COMMENT)

Roman Danyliw via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 26 February 2024 20:34 UTC

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Subject: [ippm] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang-11: (with COMMENT)
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Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang-11: No Objection

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Section 3.5.  Editorial
   The "pot-profile" contains
   the detailed information for the proof of transit data.

Wouldn’t it be more accurate to say “The ‘pot-profile is intended to contain
the detailed information …”.  As defined now, it contains no details.

** Section 5
   /ioam/ioam-profiles/ioam-profile

   The entries in the list above include the whole IOAM profile
   configurations which indirectly create or modify the device
   configurations.  Unexpected changes to these entries could lead to
   the mistake of the IOAM behavior for the corresponding flows.

Since this section is discussing Security Considerations, what are the security
consequences of “mistake[n] … IOAM behavior”?  Is any of the scope of the
Security Considerations of RFC9197 relevant?

**Section 5.  This text has no discussion of sensitivities to reading this YANG
modules?  Is there any risk in a completely readable version of this YANG
module?