Re: [ippm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-yang-10.txt

Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com> Tue, 16 August 2022 19:42 UTC

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Subject: Re: [ippm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-yang-10.txt
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Hi Footer,
thank you for your comment and suggestion. I agree that the proposed change
is logical and helpful. I will apply it and upload it with the next version.

Regards,
Greg

On Tue, Aug 16, 2022 at 8:21 AM Foote, Footer (Nokia - CA) <
footer.foote@nokia.com> wrote:

> Hi Authors.
>
> A quick question about naming of one of the state leafs in the model.  In
> the snippet below, the word "light" is included in the
> reflector-light-admin-status leaf.
>
> module: ietf-stamp
> +--ro stamp-state
>    +--ro stamp-session-refl-state {session-reflector}?
>       +--ro reflector-light-admin-status? boolean
>
> container stamp-session-refl-state {
>   if-feature session-reflector;
>   description
>     "STAMP Session-Reflector container for
>     state data";
>   leaf reflector-light-admin-status {
>     type boolean;
>     description
>       "Whether this network element is enabled to
>       act as STAMP Session-Reflector";
> }
>
> Would a rename of this leaf be inline with the rest of the document and
> the leaf description, possibly removing the world light?
>
> module: ietf-stamp
> +--ro stamp-state
>    +--ro stamp-session-refl-state {session-reflector}?
>       +--ro reflector-admin-status? boolean
>
> Thanks,
> Footer
>
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> Subject: [ippm] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-yang-10.txt
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>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the IP Performance Measurement WG of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Simple Two-way Active Measurement Protocol
> (STAMP) Data Model
>         Authors         : Greg Mirsky
>                           Xiao Min
>                           Wei S Luo
>   Filename        : draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-yang-10.txt
>   Pages           : 38
>   Date            : 2022-07-10
>
> Abstract:
>    This document specifies the data model for implementations of
>    Session-Sender and Session-Reflector for Simple Two-way Active
>    Measurement Protocol (STAMP) mode using YANG.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-yang/
>
> There is also an HTML version available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-yang-10.html
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ippm-stamp-yang-10
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