[ippm] Comment on draft-ietf-ippm-owdp-14

"nick kinraid" <nick.kinraid@alliedtelesyn.co.nz> Fri, 11 November 2005 00:27 UTC

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Hi, 
Just a small comment,

In section 3.5, page 16, 2nd to last paragraph:
"Otherwise, SID is a unique server-generated session identifier." ,
referring to the case when conf-receiver was set.

However on page 17, top paragraph:
"Note that SID is always chosen by the reciever."

Previous statments in the document refer to the receiving side generating the SID, so maybe the first sentence is incorrect and can be changed to read 'session-receiver generated...".

Regards
Nick Kinraid
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