Re: [ippm] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ippm-delay-var-as-01
Al Morton <acmorton@att.com> Thu, 08 January 2009 14:05 UTC
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Subject: Re: [ippm] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ippm-delay-var-as-01
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Christian, Thanks for your (very kind) review. We'll take care of the two nits you identified in the next version. Al and Benoit At 01:38 AM 1/8/2009, Christian Vogt wrote: >I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) >reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see >http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). > >Please wait for direction from your document shepherd >or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > > >Document..........: draft-ietf-ippm-delay-var-as-01 >Reviewer..........: Christian Vogt >Review date.......: Jan. 7, 2009 >IESG Telechat date: Jan. 8, 2009 > > >Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Informational RFC. > > >This document compares two widely used metrics for measuring packet >delay variations, and it provides guidance with respect to when to use >which of the metrics. > >I found the document clearly ready for publication. It is very >informative and easy to read. The comparison and guidelines provided by >the document are relevant given the resemblance of the observed metrics >and the variety of use cases to which the metrics potentially apply. >Furthermore, the document includes an excellent motivation and survey of >related work; this renders it useful for readers of different levels of >expertise in the field of performance measuring. Also, the document is >perfectly embedded into existing work through a large number of >well-placed references. > >Two nits, which should be fixed prior to publication, are the following: > >- Section 1.1, 3rd paragraph: "Lost and delayed packets are separated > by a waiting time threshold." -- Since the waiting time threshold > does not only apply to those packets that are lost or delayed, this > sentence should be rephrased to: "Packets for which one-way loss or > delay is measured are...". > >- Section 3.2, 4th-to-last paragraph: "The error in the alignment > process can be accounted for by a factor, A." -- A is an offset > (addend) here, not a factor. > >Best regards, >- Christian > _______________________________________________ ippm mailing list ippm@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ippm
- Re: [ippm] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ippm-dela… Al Morton
- [ippm] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-ippm-delay-va… Christian Vogt