[ippm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC9359 (7902)

RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> Fri, 19 April 2024 12:06 UTC

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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC9359,
"Echo Request/Reply for Enabled In Situ OAM (IOAM) Capabilities".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7902

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Loa Andersson <loa@pi.nu>

Section: GLOBAL

Original Text
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   Abstract
   
   This document describes a generic format for use in echo request/
   reply mechanisms, which can be used within an IOAM-Domain, allowing
   the IOAM encapsulating node to discover the enabled IOAM capabilities
   of each IOAM transit and IOAM decapsulating node.  The generic format
   is intended to be used with a variety of data planes such as IPv6,
   MPLS, Service Function Chain (SFC), and Bit Index Explicit
   Replication (BIER).

Corrected Text
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   Abstract

   This document describes a generic format for use in echo request/
   reply mechanisms, which can be used within an In Situ Operations, 
   Administration, and Maintenance (IOAM)-Domain, allowing
   the IOAM encapsulating node to discover the enabled IOAM capabilities
   of each IOAM transit and IOAM decapsulating node.  The generic format
   is intended to be used with a variety of data planes such as IPv6,
   MPLS, Service Function Chain (SFC), and Bit Index Explicit
   Replication (BIER).

Notes
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The Abstract is considered stand-alone, and any not well-known abbreviations need to be 
expanded.
Note: I'm uncertain about the placement of the "hyphen" and the parenthesis in
"In Situ Operations, Administration, and Maintenance (IOAM)-Domain"

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RFC9359 (draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-conf-state-10)
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Title               : Echo Request/Reply for Enabled In Situ OAM (IOAM) Capabilities
Publication Date    : April 2023
Author(s)           : X. Min, G. Mirsky, L. Bo
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : IP Performance Measurement
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG