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Re: [IPsec] CORRECTION: One last review: draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2bis

Sean Turner <turners@ieca.com> Tue, 13 April 2010 17:38 UTC

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Subject: Re: [IPsec] CORRECTION: One last review: draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2bis
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One nit, I missed earlier:

Section 6, there's a reference to [RFC4306] but the reference section 
uses [IKEv2].

spt

Paul Hoffman wrote:
> I have revised the IKEv2bis draft with the IETF Last Call comments. It is available at <http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2bis-09>. The diff is at <http://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2bis-09.txt>.
> 
> This is the WG's final chance for review before this is sent to the IESG for their approval. Yaron will ask our new AD, Sean Turner, to send the document to the IESG sometime early next week, so please do a final check NOW to see whether there are any mistakes introduced in the -09. Thanks!
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