[IPsec] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5739 (2090)

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Subject: [IPsec] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5739 (2090)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5739,
"IPv6 Configuration in Internet Key Exchange Protocol Version 2 (IKEv2)".

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http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5739&eid=2090

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Alfred Hoenes <ah@TR-Sys.de>

Section: 4.3,1st para

Original Text
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             [...].  However, if the same peers are also using IPsec/
   IKEv2 for other uses (with addresses not assigned inside IKEv2), they
   would also have SPD entries and PAD Child SA Authorization Data that
|  is not related to the virtual link.


Corrected Text
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             [...].  However, if the same peers are also using IPsec/
   IKEv2 for other uses (with addresses not assigned inside IKEv2), they
   would also have SPD entries and PAD Child SA Authorization Data that
|  are not related to the virtual link.


Notes
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Rationale: Grammar: "SPD entries and ... Data ... are ..."

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RFC5739 (draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev2-ipv6-config-03)
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Title               : IPv6 Configuration in Internet Key Exchange Protocol Version 2 (IKEv2)
Publication Date    : February 2010
Author(s)           : P. Eronen, J. Laganier, C. Madson
Category            : EXPERIMENTAL
Source              : IP Security Maintenance and Extensions
Area                : Security
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG