[IPsec] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-ipsecme-ipv6-ipv4-codes-05: (with COMMENT)

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draft-ietf-ipsecme-ipv6-ipv4-codes-05: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Hi Med,

Thanks for this document.  I found it pretty easy to read and follow.

One minor comments and a nit.

Minor comment:

IPv4v6 PDP-Context
 - This wasn't defined in the document, and it wasn't obvious to me what this
 is.  Perhaps have a definition or reference to the definition in the
 terminology section might be helpful.

Nit:

 attaches the network => attaches to the network

Regards,
Rob