Re: [IPsec] Typo in yang module text

Don Fedyk <dfedyk@labn.net> Thu, 18 November 2021 17:35 UTC

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From: Don Fedyk <dfedyk@labn.net>
To: Tero Kivinen <kivinen@iki.fi>, "ipsec@ietf.org" <ipsec@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: [IPsec] Typo in yang module text
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Date: Thu, 18 Nov 2021 17:35:22 +0000
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Subject: Re: [IPsec] Typo in yang module text
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Hi Tero

Thanks for spotting that, I posted replacements. 

Don 

-----Original Message-----
From: IPsec <ipsec-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Tero Kivinen
Sent: Thursday, November 18, 2021 12:08 PM
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Subject: [IPsec] Typo in yang module text


For send-immiately there is text:

             "On reception, end inner packets as soon as possible, do
              not wait for lost or misordered outer packets.
              Selecting this option reduces the inner (user) packet
              delay but can amplify out-of-order delivery of the
              inner packet stream in the presence of packet
              aggregation and any reordering.";

which should say:

             "On reception, send inner packets as soon as possible, do
	     	 	    ^----

Same typo on the mib document.

I will submit the base draft to the publication now, but will wait until the yang and mib documents are fixed before asking publication for them.
--
kivinen@iki.fi

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