Re: [IPsec] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev1-algo-to-historic-00.txt

Paul Wouters <paul@nohats.ca> Wed, 28 April 2021 15:49 UTC

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Subject: Re: [IPsec] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev1-algo-to-historic-00.txt
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On Wed, 28 Apr 2021, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:

> Subject: [IPsec] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev1-algo-to-historic-00.txt

Looks like the datatracker email does not post the diff between
different document names :P

The diff is:

https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-pwouters-ikev1-ipsec-graveyard-06.txt&url2=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ipsecme-ikev1-algo-to-historic-00.txt

Basically, it removes the IANA request to close the IKEv1 registries,
changes draft name / title to avoid "graveyard" and lists some items
as bullet points and sections, and changes some subjective wording to
more objective language.

I'm not saying this is ready for WGLC, but ....

Paul