RE: [Iptel] RE: Comments on draft-ietf-iptel-trip-mib-08.txt
"Peterson, Jon" <jon.peterson@neustar.biz> Wed, 27 August 2003 13:45 UTC
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From: "Peterson, Jon" <jon.peterson@neustar.biz>
To: "'Romascanu, Dan (Dan)'" <dromasca@avaya.com>, "Wijnen, Bert (Bert)" <bwijnen@lucent.com>, David Zinman <dzinman@rogers.com>, list iptel <iptel@ietf.org>
Cc: David Zinman <dzinman@somanetworks.com>
Subject: RE: [Iptel] RE: Comments on draft-ietf-iptel-trip-mib-08.txt
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Date: Wed, 27 Aug 2003 01:27:15 -0500
Okay, great! IETF Last call will be forthcoming shortly. Jon Peterson NeuStar, Inc. > -----Original Message----- > From: Romascanu, Dan (Dan) [mailto:dromasca@avaya.com] > Sent: Tuesday, August 26, 2003 3:07 AM > To: Wijnen, Bert (Bert); David Zinman; list iptel > Cc: David Zinman; Jon Peterson (E-mail) > Subject: RE: [Iptel] RE: Comments on draft-ietf-iptel-trip-mib-08.txt > > > The 'MIB Doctor' agrees. > > Dan > > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: Wijnen, Bert (Bert) [mailto:bwijnen@lucent.com] > > Sent: 26 August, 2003 12:19 AM > > To: 'David Zinman'; Romascanu, Dan (Dan); 'list iptel' > > Cc: 'David Zinman'; 'Bert Wijnen (E-mail)'; Jon Peterson (E-mail) > > Subject: RE: [Iptel] RE: Comments on > draft-ietf-iptel-trip-mib-08.txt > > > > > > Seems all fine to me now. > > > > One remaining NIT, can be addressed during RFC-Editing phase > > as far as I am > > concerned: > > > > RFC2119 needs to be referenced NORMATIVELY. > > > > Jon, as far as I am concerned this one is ready for IETF Last > > Call and then > > IESG Agenda. I assume that the MIB Doctor (Dan Romascanu) agrees. > > > > Thanks, > > Bert > > > > > -----Original Message----- > > > From: Wijnen, Bert (Bert) > > > Sent: maandag 11 augustus 2003 20:59 > > > To: David Zinman; Wijnen, Bert (Bert); Romascanu, Dan (Dan); > > > list iptel > > > Cc: David Zinman; Bert Wijnen (E-mail) > > > Subject: RE: [Iptel] RE: Comments on > > draft-ietf-iptel-trip-mib-07.txt > > > > > > > > > Looks good. > > > I understand that the warnings do not go away. > > > But they are "warnings", and so we check if the DESCRIPTION > > > clause has the proper instructions to implementers, and they now > > > do. So it looks good to me. > > > > > > Thanks, > > > Bert > > > > > > > -----Original Message----- > > > > From: David Zinman [mailto:dzinman@rogers.com] > > > > Sent: maandag 11 augustus 2003 20:07 > > > > To: Wijnen, Bert (Bert); Romascanu, Dan (Dan); list iptel > > > > Cc: David Zinman; Bert Wijnen (E-mail) > > > > Subject: Re: [Iptel] RE: Comments on > > > draft-ietf-iptel-trip-mib-07.txt > > > > > > > > > > > > inline: > > > > > > > > ----- Original Message ----- > > > > From: "Wijnen, Bert (Bert)" <bwijnen@lucent.com> > > > > To: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com>; "list iptel" > > > > <iptel@ietf.org> > > > > Cc: "David Zinman" <dzinman@somanetworks.com>; "Bert Wijnen > > > (E-mail)" > > > > <bwijnen@lucent.com> > > > > Sent: Monday, August 11, 2003 9:20 AM > > > > Subject: [Iptel] RE: Comments on > draft-ietf-iptel-trip-mib-07.txt > > > > > > > > > > > > > Thanks Dan for your review. > > > > > > > > > > I think the copyright-year will be addressed by RFC-Editor > > > > when it gets > > > > there. > > > > > So unless there are othe reasons for a respin, I can live > > > > with it for now. > > > > > But it seems anew rev may be wise because of my additional > > > > comments below > > > > > > > > > > I wonder why sect 14 is needed. I leave this up to TSV > > > > AD(s) on how to > > > > deal > > > > > with it. > > > > > > > > > > > > > I am leaving section 14 in for now. > > > > > > > > > From a MIB review perspective I have a few additional > comments): > > > > > - I think that RFC2788 needs to be added to normative > > > > references since > > > > > this doc IMPORTs from the NETWORK-SERVICES-MIB in RFC2788 > > > > > - TRIP-TC module does not have a REVISION clause, which we > > > > actually DO > > > > > want to have. > > > > > > > > Added both the reference to RFC 2788 and the REVISION clause > > > > in TRIP-TC > > > > > > > > > - I get these smilint warnings: > > > > > .\TRIP-MIB:327: [5] {index-exceeds-too-large} index of row > > > > `tripRouteTypeEntry' > > > > > can exceed OID size limit by 6 subidentifier(s) > > > > > .\TRIP-MIB:511: [5] {index-exceeds-too-large} index of row > > > > `tripPeerEntry' can > > > > > exceed OID size limit by 6 subidentifier(s) > > > > > SMICng complains about the same. I see > > > > > 1.3.6.1.2.1.xxxx.1.2.1.6 tripRouteTypePeer > > > > > as the first accessible object int tripRouteTypeEntry. So > > > > prefix is 11 > > > > subids > > > > > index objects are 5 integer-based objects and a var size > > > > octet string. > > > > > so we have 5 plus 1 (for lenght) plus number of octets as > > > > index part. > > > > > So we have 6 fixed (5 integers plus length value) subids > > > > plus one for > > > > every > > > > > octet in the octet string. So max size for OCTET STRING > > > should be > > > > > 111 octets, not 117. > > > > > Similar calculation for tripPeerEntry seem to tell me max > > > > lenght can be > > > > 113 > > > > > instead of 119. > > > > > This makes me thin k that it is kind of strange to ha ve > > > > different size > > > > for InetAddress, > > > > > is it not. Another way to solve these concerns is to add > > > > something to > > > > the DESCRIPTION > > > > > clause that states the implementation issues w.r.t. 128 > > > > subids instad of > > > > setting > > > > > arbitray size constrains in the SYNTAX field (that we > > > > may regret if the > > > > 128 subid > > > > > limit ever gets removed). A good example of text for this > > > > would be in > > > > > arcEntry in draft-ietf-disman-conditionmib-09.txt or > > > > sctpAssocLocalAddrEntry in > > > > > draft-ietf-sigtran-sctp-mib-10.txt > > > > > - smicng (strict checking) also complains: > > > > > > > > I have removed the restriction on the index sizes, and > > included the > > > > description > > > > of the 128 limit. However this will not get rid of the warnings. > > > > > > > > > E: f(trip.mi2), (1629,33) Item "applRFC2788Group" > > > > should be IMPORTed > > > > > it is not a MUST that you do import it. But as the > > > > mib-review-guidelines > > > > state, > > > > > it would be good to do so to not cause confusion. > > > > > > > > I have included the IMPORT > > > > > > > > > > From a generic review > > > > > - Missing reference [BCP0014] > > > > > > > > Added reference to this BCP (RFC2119) > > > > > > > > > - Ref [RFC2026] probably goes away when this becomes an RFC > > > > > > > > I'm leaving this in for now. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Thanks, > > > > > Bert > > > > > > > > > > > > > I have also addressed Dan's concern about the copyright year > > > > and the area > > > > directors in section 14. > > > > > > > > I will submit the new draft (08) if there are no > further comments. > > > > > > > > Cheers, > > > > DZ > > > > > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > Iptel mailing list > Iptel@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/iptel > _______________________________________________ Iptel mailing list Iptel@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/iptel
- RE: [Iptel] RE: Comments on draft-ietf-iptel-trip… Wijnen, Bert (Bert)
- RE: [Iptel] RE: Comments on draft-ietf-iptel-trip… Romascanu, Dan (Dan)
- RE: [Iptel] RE: Comments on draft-ietf-iptel-trip… Peterson, Jon