Re: Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-6man-rfc6434-bis-08: (with COMMENT)

Timothy Winters <twinters@iol.unh.edu> Thu, 12 July 2018 18:59 UTC

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From: Timothy Winters <twinters@iol.unh.edu>
Date: Thu, 12 Jul 2018 14:58:55 -0400
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Subject: Re: Alissa Cooper's No Objection on draft-ietf-6man-rfc6434-bis-08: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Alissa,

Thanks for taking the time to review.   I updated to capital letters and
removed the Section 9 sentence.

~Tim

On Tue, Jul 3, 2018 at 12:56 PM Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> wrote:

> Alissa Cooper has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-6man-rfc6434-bis-08: No Objection
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> I support Adam's comments concerning the use of normative keywords. In
> particular this sentence in 6.3 is in need of a normative "RECOMMENDED" I
> think:
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> "It is
>    recommended, as described in [RFC8064], that unless there is a
>    specific requirement for MAC addresses to be embedded in an IID,
>    nodes follow the procedure in [RFC7217] to generate SLAAC-based
>    addresses, rather than using [RFC4862]."
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> In Section 9, this sentence seems unlikely to remain up-to-date for the
> life of
> this document: "The IETF dnssd WG is defining solutions for DNS-based
> service
>            discovery in multi-link networks."
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