Re: [Isis-wg] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-sbfd-discriminator-02: (with COMMENT)

"Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com> Wed, 18 November 2015 16:05 UTC

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From: "Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com>
To: "Benoit Claise (bclaise)" <bclaise@cisco.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Isis-wg] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-sbfd-discriminator-02: (with COMMENT)
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Benoit -

Thanx for the review.
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> Subject: Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-isis-sbfd-discriminator-02:
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> Benoit Claise has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-isis-sbfd-discriminator-02: No Objection
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> As mentioned by Menachem in his OPS DIR review:
> NITS
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>  == Outdated reference: A later version (-05) exists of
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> In addition the following sentence may need clarification:
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> "When multiple S-BFD discriminators are advertised how a given
> discriminator is mapped to a specific use case is out of scope for this
> document."
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> It was not clear to me whether this is defined or will be defined in a different
> document or whether this is left open for each implementation.
> 

[Les:] The draft says "...out of scope for this document" - which means we intend not to say anything further about this issue in this document. In what way is this not clear?

I do appreciate that people would like an answer to the question of how to map multiple discriminators to use cases - but that is not within the purview of this document (or its companion OSPF document). We are simply defining how to transport an opaque (to the IGP) value. Anything further belongs in the base S-BFD document. I think further discussion on this point belongs there. (I have made the same statement in regards to the same discussion within the context of http://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ospf-sbfd-discriminator/ .)

   Les