Re: [Isms] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5608 (2100)

Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de> Wed, 31 March 2010 23:18 UTC

Date: Thu, 01 Apr 2010 01:18:06 +0200
From: Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de>
To: Dave Nelson <d.b.nelson@comcast.net>
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Subject: Re: [Isms] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5608 (2100)
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Reply-To: Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de>

On Wed, Mar 31, 2010 at 01:38:57PM +0200, Dave Nelson wrote:

> I recommend that this errata report and the proposed correction be accepted.

I agree. While perhaps obvious, it might be useful to mention that the
term Inactivity-Timeout appears twice in Section 2.3 and both
occurances should be replaced.

/js
 
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> > turners@ieca.com; tim.polk@nist.gov; Russ.Mundy@sparta.com;
> > j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de
> > Cc: mbj@tail-f.com; isms@ietf.org; rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org
> > Subject: [Isms] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5608 (2100)
> > 
> > 
> > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5608,
> > "Remote Authentication Dial-In User Service (RADIUS) Usage for Simple
> > Network Management Protocol (SNMP) Transport Models".
> > 
> > --------------------------------------
> > You may review the report below and at:
> > http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5608&eid=2100
> > 
> > --------------------------------------
> > Type: Editorial
> > Reported by: Martin Bjvrklund <mbj@tail-f.com>
> > 
> > Section: 2.3
> > 
> > Original Text
> > -------------
> > Inactivity-Timeout
> > 
> > Corrected Text
> > --------------
> > Idle-Timeout
> > 
> > Notes
> > -----
> > The list of attributes in section 3 correctly lists the Idle-Timeout
> > attribute.
> > 
> > Instructions:
> > -------------
> > This errata is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
> > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
> > rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG)
> > can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
> > 
> > --------------------------------------
> > RFC5608 (draft-ietf-isms-radius-usage-07)
> > --------------------------------------
> > Title               : Remote Authentication Dial-In User Service (RADIUS)
> > Usage for Simple Network Management Protocol (SNMP) Transport Models
> > Publication Date    : August 2009
> > Author(s)           : K. Narayan, D. Nelson
> > Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> > Source              : Integrated Security Model for SNMP
> > Area                : Security
> > Stream              : IETF
> > Verifying Party     : IESG
> 

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[Isms] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5608 (2100) RFC Errata System
Re: [Isms] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5608 (2… Dave Nelson
Re: [Isms] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5608 (2… Juergen Schoenwaelder
Re: [Isms] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5608 (2… Sean Turner