[ipwave] Mirja Kühlewind's Discuss on draft-ietf-ipwave-ipv6-over-80211ocb-49: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

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DISCUSS:
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One point on this sentence, which I believe was also commented in the TSV-ART
review (Thanks Jörg!):

sec 4.2: "The mapping to the 802.11 data service MUST use a
   'priority' value of 1, which specifies the use of QoS with a
   'Background' user priority."
I don't think this should be a MUST requirement. I assume the assumption here
is that IP traffic is always some "random" data that is less important than
other V2V communication. However, this is a generic mapping document and should
therefore probably not make such an assumption (or at least it would need to be
spelled out).


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COMMENT:
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One editorial high level comment: I seams like all text that was somehow deemed
as out fo scope for the main body of this document got stuffed into the
appendix. Please consider removing what is really not needed in this document
as these pages also take review and RFC Editor time, especially as they seem to
have received less review and therefore have more nits.

nit: sec 4.5.2 s/in OCB mode.A  A future improvement/in OCB mode. A future
improvement/