[Jmap] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-jmap-smime-09

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Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-jmap-smime-09
Reviewer: Peter Yee
Review Date: 2021-10-17
IETF LC End Date: 2021-10-18
IESG Telechat date: 2021-10-21

Summary: This document provides a JMAP extension that allows the JMAP server to
provide its thoughts on the verification of a message's S/MIME signature. My
concerns over -07 have been addressed in the subsequent versions of the draft.
[Ready with nits]

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments:

Page 2, section 1, 1st paragraph, 1st sentence: change "JSON based" to
"JSON-based".

Page 2, section 1, 2nd paragraph, 3rd sentence: change "client side" to
"client-side".