Re: [Jmap] Publication has been requested for draft-ietf-jmap-smime-07
"Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com> Sat, 21 August 2021 22:24 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Jmap] Publication has been requested for draft-ietf-jmap-smime-07
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Hi all, here's my AD review for this short document: Please use the correct boilerplate text for BCP 14. You've got the old version here. I suggest using "specification" rather than "spec" (e.g., in Section 3). And while I'm at it, it might be helpful to identify RFC 8620 as JMAP at its first use in Section 2, because then in Section 3 you refer to "the JMAP spec" but it's not clear which one that is. In Section 4, for "smimeStatus", mapping unrecognized values to "signal/failed" seems a curious choice. Why not allow only "unknown"? For Section 4, I suggest (but you don't have to) giving each property a separate subsection. Otherwise this is in good shape. The above things are minor enough that you can just handle them as Last Call comments, and I'll go request that now. -MSK On Thu, Aug 19, 2021 at 5:22 AM Bron Gondwana via Datatracker < noreply@ietf.org> wrote: > Bron Gondwana has requested publication of draft-ietf-jmap-smime-07 as > Proposed Standard on behalf of the JMAP working group. > > Please verify the document's state at > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-jmap-smime/ > > >
- [Jmap] Publication has been requested for draft-i… Bron Gondwana via Datatracker
- Re: [Jmap] Publication has been requested for dra… Murray S. Kucherawy
- Re: [Jmap] Publication has been requested for dra… Alexey Melnikov