Re: [jose] Working Group Last Call - draft-ietf-jose-use-cases

Mike Jones <Michael.Jones@microsoft.com> Tue, 18 June 2013 22:54 UTC

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My last call comments are attached in the form of changes applied relative to the -02 source.  They can all be easily seen as tracked changes in the attached .docx version.  Most are editorial in nature, however there are a few factual corrections also applied.  Those were:


*         Make it clear that the application may specify another means or convention to determine the key used.

*         Corrected "JWT" -> "OAuth" in the sentence "In OAuth, the "client_id" parameter identifies the key to be used."

*         Don't say that OAuth is used in Mozilla Persona.

*         I reverted the "S1" Security Requirements text to the -01 version, since the -02 text would prohibit the direct encryption use case.

Once these changes are applied and Ludwig Seitz' direct encryption use case is added, I'm good with seeing the document progress.

                                                                -- Mike

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This message starts the Working Group Last Call on the Use Cases document.

Minor issues should be sent to the list

Major issues (those that should block the document from proceeding to the IESG) should be sent to the list and an issue created in the tracker.

The final day for Last Call comments is June 16, 2013


Jim