[KEYPROV] PROTO WRITEUP for draft-ietf-keyprov-symmetrickeyformat-07
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PROTO WRITEUP for draft-ietf-keyprov-symmetrickeyformat-07 ========================================================== http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-keyprov-symmetrickeyformat-07 (1.a) Who is the Document Shepherd for this document? Has the Document Shepherd personally reviewed this version of the document and, in particular, does he or she believe this version is ready for forwarding to the IESG for publication? The document shepherd is Hannes Tschofenig (Hannes.Tschofenig@gmx.net). I have personally reviewed the document and I believe it is ready for publication. (1.b) Has the document had adequate review both from key WG members and from key non-WG members? Does the Document Shepherd have any concerns about the depth or breadth of the reviews that have been performed? The document was reviewed by working group members. There are no concerns regarding the depth or breadth of the review. Most members of the KEYPROV working group, however, do not have a lot of expertise with ASN.1. Fortunately, this document was created inline with PSKC and represents the ASN.1 based encoded version of PSKC. (1.c) Does the Document Shepherd have concerns that the document needs more review from a particular or broader perspective, e.g., security, operational complexity, someone familiar with AAA, internationalization, or XML? There are no concerns with this document. The document contains ASN.1 code that has been verified by tools. (1.d) Does the Document Shepherd have any specific concerns or issues with this document that the Responsible Area Director and/or the IESG should be aware of? For example, perhaps he or she is uncomfortable with certain parts of the document, or has concerns whether there really is a need for it. In any event, if the WG has discussed those issues and has indicated that it still wishes to advance the document, detail those concerns here. Has an IPR disclosure related to this document been filed? If so, please include a reference to the disclosure and summarize the WG discussion and conclusion on this issue. There are no concerns with this document. No IPR disclosures have been field. (1.e) How solid is the WG consensus behind this document? Does it represent the strong concurrence of a few individuals, with others being silent, or does the WG as a whole understand and agree with it? There is consensus in the WG behind the document. (1.f) Has anyone threatened an appeal or otherwise indicated extreme discontent? If so, please summarize the areas of conflict in separate email messages to the Responsible Area Director. (It should be in a separate email because this questionnaire is entered into the ID Tracker.) There is no opposition to this document. (1.g) Has the Document Shepherd personally verified that the document satisfies all ID nits? (See http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html and http://tools.ietf.org/tools/idnits/.) Boilerplate checks are not enough; this check needs to be thorough. Has the document met all formal review criteria it needs to, such as the MIB Doctor, media type, and URI type reviews? If the document does not already indicate its intended status at the top of the first page, please indicate the intended status here. The document does not contain nits. (1.h) Has the document split its references into normative and informative? Are there normative references to documents that are not ready for advancement or are otherwise in an unclear state? If such normative references exist, what is the strategy for their completion? Are there normative references that are downward references, as described in [RFC3967]? If so, list these downward references to support the Area Director in the Last Call procedure for them [RFC3967]. The document has been split into normative and informative references. ***BEGIN DOWREF ALERT*** This document refers normatively to two informative documents (draft-ietf-pkix-new-asn1 and draft-ietf-smime-new-asn1), one experimental RFC (RFC 4049), and 5 "superseded" ITU/ISO standards ('02 X.680, X.681, X.682, X.683, X.690). The references to the two informative documents are necessary because we're using '02 ASN.1 and we want to import ASN.1 objects instead of copying them. The '02 ASN.1 is used instead of the '08 ASN.1 because that's what PKIX/SMIME use (there are freeware compilers available). The experimental ID reference is necessary to allow us to import syntax for binary time instead of duplicating it. Note that I believe the IETF LC message will need to be manually modified to indicate these these DOWNREFs. ***END DOWNREF ALERT*** (1.i) Has the Document Shepherd verified that the document's IANA Considerations section exists and is consistent with the body of the document? If the document specifies protocol extensions, are reservations requested in appropriate IANA registries? Are the IANA registries clearly identified? If the document creates a new registry, does it define the proposed initial contents of the registry and an allocation procedure for future registrations? Does it suggest a reasonable name for the new registry? See [RFC2434]. If the document describes an Expert Review process, has the Document Shepherd conferred with the Responsible Area Director so that the IESG can appoint the needed Expert during IESG Evaluation? There are no IANA considerations. (1.j) Has the Document Shepherd verified that sections of the document that are written in a formal language, such as XML code, BNF rules, MIB definitions, etc., validate correctly in an automated checker? The ASN.1 modules were compiled with dummy OID values while we await final assignment. (1.k) The IESG approval announcement includes a Document Announcement Write-Up. Please provide such a Document Announcement Write-Up. Recent examples can be found in the "Action" announcements for approved documents. The approval announcement contains the following sections: Technical Summary This document provides the ASN.1 variant of the Portable Symmetric Key Container (PSKC), which is defined using XML in draft-ietf-keyprov-pskc-05. The symmetric key container defines a transport independent mechanism for one or more symmetric keys as well as any associated attributes. The container by itself is insecure; it can be secured using either the Dynamic Symmetric Key Provisioning Protocol (DSKPP) [draft-ietf-keyprov-dskpp] or a CMS protecting content types [RFC5652]. In addition to the key container, this document also defines ASN.1 version of the XML elements and attributes defined in PSKC. Working Group Summary The WG agreed that this container would be the optional container, but there was a contingent (both in the WG and in the IEEE) that wanted the ASN.1 container. The format for the container has been stable since version -02. The ASN.1 converted XML elements and attributes were added in the last version to ensure alignment with PSKC. Document Quality The document is a product of the KEYPROV working group. The text of this document is derived from the XML elements and attributes defined in draft-ietf-keyprov-pskc. As such, this document represents the ASN.1 based version of the XML-based counterpart. Personnel Hannes Tschofenig is the document shepherd for this document.
- [KEYPROV] PROTO WRITEUP for draft-ietf-keyprov-sy… Hannes Tschofenig
- Re: [KEYPROV] PROTO WRITEUP for draft-ietf-keypro… Anders Rundgren
- Re: [KEYPROV] PROTO WRITEUP for draft-ietf-keypro… Sean Turner
- Re: [KEYPROV] PROTO WRITEUP for draft-ietf-keypro… Anders Rundgren