[L1vpn] Fwd: I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-l1vpn-framework-05.txt

[Tomonori TAKEDA <[e-mail]>]

Hi,

We have submitted the revised version of L1VPN framework and requirement 
I-D, based on IESG review comments.

You can see the changes via the I-D tracker, but here is a list of changes.

1) Add text on what is L1VPNs at the begining of the document (section 2)
2) Clean up text on what are essential features in L1VPNs (section 3.1.2)
3) Refine text on Inter-AS/SP L1VPN issues (section 4.3.4)
4) Refine Figure 5.1 on the L1VPN reference model (addition of Cs, etc) 
(section 5)
5) Add text on NAT and firewall issues (section 6.1)
6) Refine text on security considerations (section 12.2)
7) Move some references from informative to normative
8) Fix various purely editorial nits

Thanks,
Tomonori

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 >	Title		: Framework and Requirements for Layer 1 Virtual Private Networks
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