[L2sm] [Errata Held for Document Update] RFC8466 (6383)

RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> Mon, 02 October 2023 14:59 UTC

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The following errata report has been held for document update 
for RFC8466, "A YANG Data Model for Layer 2 Virtual Private Network (L2VPN) Service Delivery". 

You may review the report below and at:

Status: Held for Document Update
Type: Technical

Reported by: Julian Lucek <jlucek@juniper.net>
Date Reported: 2021-01-08
Held by: Rob Wilton (IESG)

Section: 8

Original Text
container service {
              container svc-bandwidth {
                if-feature "input-bw";
                list bandwidth {
                  key "direction type";
                  leaf direction {
                    type identityref {
                      base bw-direction;
                      "Indicates the bandwidth direction.  It can be
                       the bandwidth download direction from the SP to
                       the site or the bandwidth upload direction from
                       the site to the SP.";

Corrected Text

The svc-bandwidth container is triggered by if-feature "input-bw". However, that container can contain input-bw only, output-bw only or both. It might be better to have two separate containers, one for input-bw and the other for output-bw, triggered by if-feature "input-bw" and if-feature "output-bw" respectively.

The bug looks to be valid, but this erratum has been marked as "Hold For Document Update" because further discussion is required as to the solution, and it will require a new revision of the YANG module which will require a new RFC to be published.

RFC8466 (draft-ietf-l2sm-l2vpn-service-model-10)
Title               : A YANG Data Model for Layer 2 Virtual Private Network (L2VPN) Service Delivery
Publication Date    : October 2018
Author(s)           : B. Wen, G. Fioccola, Ed., C. Xie, L. Jalil
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : L2VPN Service Model
Area                : Operations and Management
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG