MIB Dr. Review of draft-ietf-l3vpn-vr-mib-04.txt
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Subject: MIB Dr. Review of draft-ietf-l3vpn-vr-mib-04.txt
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Hi Folks, Following is the MIB Dr. Review of draft-ietf-l3vpn-vr-mib-04.txt Thanks, -Joan ------------------- Compiler Issues ------------------------- Please fix the following compiler issues: Output from smilint ---------------------- Validation report File: VIRTUAL-ROUTER-MIB Severity level requested: 6 Line Severity Problem 72 5 warning: type `VrIdentifier' has no format specification Output from smicng ------------------- E: f(VIRTUAL-ROUTER-MIB), (321,18) Default value for "vrRpTrigger" must be named bits in "{ }" GENERAL QUESTIONS OR OBSERVATIONS --------------------------------- * Is this MIB supposed to be standards track? There was some discussion on making the IPSEC and VR VPN architectures informational. * The abbreviation (VR) should be pluralized when referring to more than one Virtual Router. * update to reference rfc4265.txt which is the VPN-TC-STD-MIB (both in MIB and in Normative Reference Section) TABLE OF CONTENTS --------------------- * Table of Contents needs to have page numbers added. * Also, no need to use .0 as in 1.0, 2.0, etc. for sections. Please just use numbers 1., 2., etc. 2.0 Introduction ------------------- * The document refers to PPVPN but the working group is now L3VPN so should this be updated in the references and elsewhere. * The second and third goal should be removed. The MIB Module should be implementable and also provide functionality as described by the first goal, so no need to state the 2nd and 3rd goal. Please combine the first goal with the previous paragraph. * Suggestion only: you may want to combine the Terminology Section with the Introduction. 4.0 Overview of the Virtual Router MIB Module ------------------------------------------------ 4.1 SNMP Contexts for Management for Virtual Routers ------------------------------------------------------- This section is somewhat troubling due to some statements such as "There is a need for a single agent..." mixed in with some insightful considerations that may be taken into account by a network management architect of a Virtual Router device. Could you list these considerations without mandating a specific architecture? For example, instead of mandating the use of VR 0 as an "Admin" domain which has certain properties, could you state that one consideration is to have a SNMP entity on the device that can view all of the data, including data that resides in the alll Virtual Routers. Additionally, the use of the context as a unique index accross the VPN seems wrong and not sure that this is actually enforceable. Last but not least, some of the language used is inconsistent with that of RFC3411. Since you reference RFC3411, please be consistent with the use of terminology. 4.3 Creation and Deletion of VRs --------------------------------- * Please rename this to "The Virtual Router Configuration Table" and update the text as needed. * The paragraph: "VRID 0 is assigned to the Administrative VR, which exists by default, and need not be created. Deletion of the Administrative VR will not be permitted. The VRID of the Administrative VR (VRID 0) should be a reserved VRID number. VRID 0 could be termed the "null VR" and it could be the context that manages the resource pool of unattached interfaces. Routing would then not exist in the context of Administrative VR." Should probably be removed (again, this is imposing an architecture which is out of scope of a MIB document.) 4.4 Administrative and Operational Status of VRs ------------------------------------------------- * could this be renamed "The Virtual Router Status Table" 4.4.1 VR Routing Protocol Trigger ------------------------------------ * could you please put "Object" on the end of this. 4.6 Setting per VR limits --------------------------- * this should be a subsection under the vrConfigTable section. 4.8 Traps ----------- * The current terminology is notification. Please change this in the title of this section and through the document. 4.9 Usability Considerations ------------------------------- You may want to completely remove any architectual descriptions from this MIB document. That would be my preference, but if you believe that it's best to include such section than think you should list the above single SNMP agent description in this section, along with the multiple agent description. 4.9.2 Provisioning vs. Monitoring ---------------------------------- This section is not needed. The MIB Module's conformance statements should specify both a read-write/create (full conformance) and a read-only conformance. 5.1 Creation of a VR ------------------------- * Item #2 says "Using a context with a 'read-write' access for system level entities. This should probably be reworded. 6.0 Definition of the Virtual Router MIB Module -------------------------------------------------- * Name of the Module: VIRTUAL-ROUTER-MIB - Could you include VPN some place in this title? e.g. VIRTUAL-ROUTER-VPN-MIB. This should be carried as the prefix throughout the MIB, so would expect to see vrVpnObjects, vrVpnConformance, etc. - if this is a standard's track document, then also STD should be included in the MIB title to be consistent with other MIB modules from this working group: e.g. VIRTUAL-ROUTER-VPN-STD-MIB * The following note should be removed as this is now RFC4265. -- RFC Ed.: VPN-TC-STD-MIB in Last Call in L3VPN WG * DisplayString is no longer used in MIB Modules. This is because it does not support internationalized text. see: http://www.ops.ietf.org/mib-common-tcs.html Better to use SnmpAdminString defined in SNMP-FRAMEWORK-MIB [RFC3411], or some other TC which supports internationalization. * VrIdentifier, please remove the VRID of 0 is the Administrative VR. * VrRpTriggerBitCode Please specify that the value of 1 indicates that the Routing Protocol will be or has been initiated on the Virtual Router, and 0 indicates that the Routing protocol is not running, or has been requested to be shutdown. (In other words, please describe what the BIT values of 1 and 0 mean.) * Please put top level OIDs together, for example: vrNotifications OBJECT IDENTIFIER ::= { virtualRouterMIB 0 } vrMIBObjects OBJECT IDENTIFIER ::= { virtualRouterMIB 1 } vrConformance OBJECT IDENTIFIER ::= { virtualRouterMIB 2 } - Please rename: vrNotifications to vrVpnNotifications, vrMIBObjects to vrVpnObjects, and vrConformance to vrVpnConformance., * Please rename vrConfig to vrVpnConfigObjects * vrConfigNextAvailableVrId could use the TC from the DIFFSERV-MIB: IndexIntegerNextFree. This TC is in use in several MIBs and will provide the same functionality as you intend. * VrConfigEntry Suggestion only: could you put the object name and Type on the same line. Also, please put RowStatus as the last object in the entry. Granted these are more stylistic suggestions but seem to be fairly common place in IETF MIB Modules. * vrId - as mentioned previously, please remove the discussion regarding VRID 0. - Please include some discussion about how to use vrConfigNextAvailableVrId to acquire a value for this index. (suggestion to look at DIFFSERV-MIB as an example.) * vrTrapEnable - Please rename to vrNotificationEnabled - I *think* this object can be removed and the MIBs in RFC2573 be used instead. Please comment on this. In other words, this object might control whether or not the instrumentation generates a notification, but the actual sending is controlled by the MIBs in RFC2573. For this object, it would seem that the sending is more the issue than the VR creation/deletion. * vrAdminStatus - Why is the DEFVAL { down } ? *vrMaxRoutesTrapEnable - same comments as with vrTrapEnable * vrStat - Please rename to vrStatusObjects, vrStatusScalars, etc. * vrConfiguredVRs and vrActiveVRs seem to be objects that could be figured out by the management station. Could you explain what the motivation is for having them in the MIB? - Also, these should be type Gauge32. * vrStatTable -- the description should be changed to status and not statistics. * INDEX is the same as VrConfigTable, should this have an AUGMENTS relationship? * vrStatEntry - same comments as with vrConfigEntry * vrStatRouteEntries and vrStatFIBEntries should probably be Gauge32 *vrOperStatus - could unknown(3) be listed first? Also, wouldn't testing be a valid status for this object? * vrIfConfig - please change to vrIfConfigObjects * vrIfConfigTable's description is confusing. Is this table used to add and delete Interfaces that exist in the ifTable to the Virtual Router? If so then could that be stated in the DESCRIPTION for the table? * vrNotificationPrefix should be removed * vrUp - could the description be a little more generic, such as "operational status to up from any other state". In other words, must it really go from "down to up" or would it be valid to go from "testing to up"? * vrDown - could you also include the vrAdminStatus for this object? * Conformance/Compliance statements need to include a statement for read-only compliance. In other words, if an implementation only wants to use this MIB for monitoring, then they should also have a way to be compliant. - Also, regarding InetAddressType and InetAddress, you may only want to require that an implementation support a subset (example from DIFFSERV-MIB): OBJECT diffServMultiFieldClfrAddrType SYNTAX InetAddressType { unknown(0), ipv4(1), ipv6(2) } DESCRIPTION "An implementation is only required to support IPv4 and IPv6 addresses." OBJECT diffServMultiFieldClfrDstAddr SYNTAX InetAddress (SIZE(0|4|16)) DESCRIPTION "An implementation is only required to support IPv4 and globally unique IPv6 addresses." - also with RowStatus, you may want something like: OBJECT diffServAlgDropStatus SYNTAX RowStatus { active(1) } WRITE-SYNTAX RowStatus { createAndGo(4), destroy(6) } DESCRIPTION "Support for createAndWait and notInService is not required." 7. Acknowledgements Please add: This document is a product of the L3VPN Working Group. Thanks for the acknowledgement. 8. Security Considerations There are no objects listed but a couple of paragraphs say something like: " These are the tables and objects and their sensitivity/vulnerability:" but then there aren't any objects listed. Please update this section. It was difficult to review as it seems incomplete. 9. References Need to be updated. [VPNTCMIB] B. Schliesser, and T. Nadeau, "Definition of Textual Conventions for Provider Provisioned Virtual Private Network (PPVPN) Management.", Internet Draft <draft-ietf-l3vpn-tc-mib-03.txt>, May 2004. As previously mentioned this is now rfc4265. And there are other drafts which are now RFCs listed. end.
- MIB doctor Review for: 'Virtual Router Management… Wijnen, Bert (Bert)
- Re: MIB doctor Review for: 'Virtual Router Manage… jcucchiara
- Re: MIB doctor Review for: 'Virtual Router Manage… jcucchiara
- MIB Dr. Review of draft-ietf-l3vpn-vr-mib-04.txt jcucchiara