Re: [Lager] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7940 (6102)

"Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck@verisign.com> Tue, 14 April 2020 12:14 UTC

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From: "Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck@verisign.com>
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Thread-Topic: [EXTERNAL] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7940 (6102)
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Subject: Re: [Lager] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7940 (6102)
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
> Sent: Tuesday, April 14, 2020 3:38 AM
> To: kim.davies@icann.org; asmus@unicode.org; superuser@gmail.com;
> barryleiba@computer.org; Hollenbeck, Scott <shollenbeck@verisign.com>;
> Marc.Blanchet@viagenie.ca
> Cc: michael.bauland@knipp.de; lager@ietf.org; rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org
> Subject: [EXTERNAL] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7940 (6102)
>
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7940, "Representing
> Label Generation Rulesets Using XML".
>
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6102
>
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Michael Bauland <michael.bauland@knipp.de>
>
> Section: 5.4.2.
>
> Original Text
> -------------
> Any "char", "range", or "variant" element in the "data" section may contain
> an OPTIONAL "comment" attribute.
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> Any "char", "range", or "var" element in the "data" section may contain an
> OPTIONAL "comment" attribute.
>
> Notes
> -----
> The variant element is <var> not <variant>.
>
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> --------------------------------------
> RFC7940 (draft-ietf-lager-specification-13)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Representing Label Generation Rulesets Using XML
> Publication Date    : August 2016
> Author(s)           : K. Davies, A. Freytag
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Label Generation Rules
> Area                : Applications and Real-Time
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG

This should be verified. The RELAX NG Schema in Appendix D describes the name of the element as "var".

Scott