Re: [Lake] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lake-edhoc-21.txt

Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> Fri, 25 August 2023 11:10 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Lake] I-D Action: draft-ietf-lake-edhoc-21.txt
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Hiya,

On 25/08/2023 10:33, Göran Selander wrote:
> Hi Stephen, and all,
> 
> The authors think they have now addressed all IESG comments and there
> are no DISCUSSes left. 

Good job!

> Please note that there are some small updates
> in the github master branch didn’t make it into -21, including final
> comment on section 3.4 from Zahed Sarker, change log for -21, and
> acknowledgments.
> 
> We plan to submit -22 today, unless there is reason to wait.

I'd say, unless our AD says otherwise, once you're happy
you've landed on text that you think works, shoot out -22.

Cheers,
S.


> 
> Göran
> 
> From: Lake <lake-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Stephen Farrell
> <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> Date: Thursday, 24 August 2023 at 20:41 
> To: lake@ietf.org <lake@ietf.org> Subject: Re: [Lake] I-D Action:
> draft-ietf-lake-edhoc-21.txt
> 
> Hi all,
> 
> As you'll have seen, a bunch of comments were (as usual:-) received
> during IESG review of edhoc and the editors have worked really
> quickly to handle those. (@editors: do you think we've addressed all
> of those?)
> 
> I had a look over the diffs and I don't see any changes that would
> require the WG to pause and think again about anything so don't at
> this stage plan to do that. But if I missed some substantive change,
> please do yell and we can take a look.
> 
> All going well, that'd mean the IESG will clear their DISCUSS 
> positions and then the draft will be sent to the RFC editor queue.
> (Or, there may be a little more back-and-forth with IESG members,
> we'll see.)
> 
> Cheers, S.
> 
> On 24/08/2023 18:59, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>> Internet-Draft draft-ietf-lake-edhoc-21.txt is now available. It is
>> a work item of the Lightweight Authenticated Key Exchange (LAKE) WG
>> of the IETF.
>> 
>> Title:   Ephemeral Diffie-Hellman Over COSE (EDHOC) Authors: Göran
>> Selander John Preuß Mattsson Francesca Palombini Name:
>> draft-ietf-lake-edhoc-21.txt Pages:   111 Dates:   2023-08-24
>> 
>> Abstract:
>> 
>> This document specifies Ephemeral Diffie-Hellman Over COSE (EDHOC),
>> a very compact and lightweight authenticated Diffie-Hellman key 
>> exchange with ephemeral keys.  EDHOC provides mutual
>> authentication, forward secrecy, and identity protection.  EDHOC is
>> intended for usage in constrained scenarios and a main use case is
>> to establish an OSCORE security context.  By reusing COSE for
>> cryptography, CBOR for encoding, and CoAP for transport, the
>> additional code size can be kept very low.
>> 
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is: 
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lake-edhoc/
>> 
>> There is also an HTML version available at: 
>> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-lake-edhoc-21.html
>> 
>> A diff from the previous version is available at: 
>> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-lake-edhoc-21
>> 
>> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at: 
>> rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
>> 
>> 
>