Re: [Lake] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-lake-traces-07: (with COMMENT)

Göran Selander <goran.selander@ericsson.com> Mon, 18 September 2023 08:00 UTC

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From: Göran Selander <goran.selander@ericsson.com>
To: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Lake] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-lake-traces-07: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Roman,

Thanks for your review. Your comment is tracked in #448<https://github.com/lake-wg/edhoc/issues/448> and addressed in 340e442<https://github.com/lake-wg/edhoc/commit/340e442>.
(Latest version on the github is here<https://lake-wg.github.io/edhoc/draft-ietf-lake-traces.html>.)

Göran

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Date: Friday, 15 September 2023 at 21:42
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Subject: Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-lake-traces-07: (with COMMENT)
Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-lake-traces-07: No Objection

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Thank you for writing this document.  I am confident that it will help future
implementers.

I did not personally verify the encodings.

** Section 1.1
   The traces in this draft are valid for version -22 of
   [I-D.ietf-lake-edhoc].  The traces has been verified by two
   independent implementations.

I appreciate the precision of this statement.  In the long term, shouldn’t
these traces be valid for whatever RFC this EDHOC becomes.  Recommend providing
instructions to the RFC Editor to replace [I-D.ietf-lake-edhoc] with the
yet-to-be-assigned RFC number.