[Lake] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-lake-traces-07: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 21 September 2023 05:34 UTC

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Subject: [Lake] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-lake-traces-07: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-lake-traces-07: No Objection

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I don't think you want BCP 14 here.  The solitary "MUST" you do have is
actually citing another document; this one is Informational and not actually
stating any of its own requirements.  I'd suggest removing the BCP 14
references and the matching boilerplate, but quote the "MUST" or even just say
that document "requires" (lowercase) something specific.

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