Re: [Last-Call] [OPSAWG] I-D Action: draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-15.txt

Eliot Lear <lear@lear.ch> Mon, 27 March 2023 16:15 UTC

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Good morning, good afternoon, and good evening!

The below should resolve LC comments.  A number of references are 
corrected, and a paragraph is added to discuss multiple objects being 
returned.

Eliot

On 27.03.23 18:12, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories. This Internet-Draft is a work item of the Operations and
> Management Area Working Group (OPSAWG) WG of the IETF.
>
>     Title           : Discovering and Retrieving Software Transparency and Vulnerability Information
>     Authors         : Eliot Lear
>                       Scott Rose
>     Filename        : draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-15.txt
>     Pages           : 20
>     Date            : 2023-03-27
>
> Abstract:
>     To improve cybersecurity posture, automation is necessary to locate
>     what software is running on a device, whether that software has known
>     vulnerabilities, and what, if any recommendations suppliers may have.
>     This memo extends the MUD YANG model to provide the locations of
>     software bills of materials (SBOMS) and to vulnerability information.
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access/
>
> There is also an htmlized version available at:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-15
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-15
>
> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
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