Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospfv3-extended-lsa-yang-27

Acee Lindem <acee.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 25 January 2024 16:13 UTC

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From: Acee Lindem <acee.ietf@gmail.com>
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Date: Thu, 25 Jan 2024 11:13:34 -0500
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-ospfv3-extended-lsa-yang-27
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Thanks for the review Meral!!! See one inline. 

> On Jan 25, 2024, at 00:05, Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review result: Ready
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> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> For more information, please see the FAQ at
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> Document: draft-ietf-lsr-ospfv3-extended-lsa-yang-27
> Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
> Review Date: 2024-01-24
> IETF LC End Date: 2024-01-25
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Standards Track RFC.

I guess you mean this is “almost” ready since it still needs to go through the IESG telecast. 

Thanks,
Acee


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