[Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-nvo3-encap-10

Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sat, 18 November 2023 02:14 UTC

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Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-nvo3-encap-10
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2023-11-17
IETF LC End Date: 2023-11-18
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Informational RFC.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:
-[Page 7], "Broadcase"-->"Broadcast"

- [Page 10], "svailable"-->"available"