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Re: [Last-Call] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-dots-signal-filter-control-04

Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu> Tue, 16 June 2020 15:06 UTC

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Date: Tue, 16 Jun 2020 08:06:48 -0700
From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>
To: Tim Chown <Tim.Chown@jisc.ac.uk>
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-dots-signal-filter-control-04
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On Tue, Jun 16, 2020 at 02:57:18PM +0000, Tim Chown wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> Some comments on your comments in line….
> 
> > On 16 Jun 2020, at 06:51, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com wrote:
> > 
> > Hi Tim,
> > 
> > Thank you for the review. Much appreciated. 
> > 
> > A candidate version that takes into account your review is available at: 
> > 
> > https://github.com/boucadair/filter-control/blob/master/draft-ietf-dots-signal-filter-control-05.txt 
> 
> [TC] what would be great is a diff to the version I reviewed.

Try
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url1=draft-ietf-dots-signal-filter-control-04&url2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/boucadair/filter-control/master/draft-ietf-dots-signal-filter-control-05.txt

-Ben

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