Re: [Last-Call] RtgDir Last Call review: draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-conf-state-10
Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Tue, 13 December 2022 16:48 UTC
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From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 13 Dec 2022 11:48:27 -0500
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] RtgDir Last Call review: draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-conf-state-10
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Sorry, sent prematurely, please await the full message. :-( Thanks, Donald =============================== Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) 2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA d3e3e3@gmail.com On Tue, Dec 13, 2022 at 11:46 AM Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> wrote: > Hello, > > I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. > The Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related > drafts as they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes > on special request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to > the Routing ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please > see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir > > Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it > would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last > Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through > discussion or by updating the draft. > > Document: draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-conf-state-10 > Reviewer: Donald Eastlake 3rd > Review Date: 13 December 2022 > IETF LC End Date: > Intended Status: Standards Track > > *Summary:* > Choose from this list... > > - No issues found. This document is ready for publication. > - This document is basically ready for publication but has nits that > should be considered prior to publication. > - I have some minor concerns about this document that I think should > be resolved before publication. > - I have significant concerns about this document and recommend that > the Routing ADs discuss these issues further with the authors. > > *Comments:* > > - Please supply an overview of the draft quality and readability. > - Include anything else that you think will be helpful toward > understanding your review. > > *Major Issues:* > > - Major issues are the type of concerns that will result in the > document being blocked until they are resolved. The Routing ADs will become > involved. > - Please include all of the major issues you have found. Give as much > context information as possible (e.g., section numbers, paragraph counts). > - If you find no major issues, please write: "No major issues found." > > *Minor Issues:* > > - Minor issues are concerns about clarity or technical accuracy that > should be discussed and resolved before publication, but which would > normally be resolved between the authors and the reviewers. > - Please include all of the minor issues you have found. Give as much > context information as possible (e.g., section numbers, paragraph counts). > - If you find no minor issues, please write: "No minor issues found." > > *Nits:* > > Section 1, page 3: > OLD > Furthermore, each IOAM encapsulating node needs to establish NETCONF > Connection with each IOAM transit and IOAM decapsulating node, the > scalability can be an issue. NEW > Furthermore, each IOAM encapsulating node needs to establish a NETCONF > Connection with each IOAM transit and IOAM decapsulating node, so > scalability can be an issue. > Section 1, Page 4/5: > Thanks, > Donald > =============================== > Donald E. Eastlake 3rd +1-508-333-2270 (cell) > 2386 Panoramic Circle, Apopka, FL 32703 USA > d3e3e3@gmail.com >
- [Last-Call] RtgDir Last Call review: draft-ietf-i… Donald Eastlake
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