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Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-hystartplusplus-13

Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org> Mon, 13 February 2023 14:55 UTC

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From: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>
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Date: Mon, 13 Feb 2023 16:55:02 +0200
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-tcpm-hystartplusplus-13
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Stewart, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.

Lars


> On Feb 1, 2023, at 12:34, Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-tcpm-hystartplusplus-13
> Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
> Review Date: 2023-02-01
> IETF LC End Date: 2023-01-25
> IESG Telechat date: 2023-02-16
> 
> Summary: A well written document ready to do with just one small comment.
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments: Remembering that this is the GENART review undertaken
> as a non-specialist, I am not sure how well known the clamp function is. I had
> to look it up, but once I did it was obvious. You might consider a few words to
> define it for the reader.
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