Re: [Last-Call] Opsdir last call review of draft-schaad-cbor-content-01
Jim Schaad <ietf@augustcellars.com> Tue, 26 November 2019 03:42 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] Opsdir last call review of draft-schaad-cbor-content-01
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Fixed -----Original Message----- From: Sarah Banks via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sent: Thursday, October 31, 2019 1:29 PM To: ops-dir@ietf.org Cc: last-call@ietf.org; draft-schaad-cbor-content.all@ietf.org Subject: Opsdir last call review of draft-schaad-cbor-content-01 Reviewer: Sarah Banks Review result: Ready Reviewer: Sarah Banks Status: Ready This draft describes defines a set of content types for CMS that hold CBOR content. The abstract text requires you to know what the document is already about, but the Introduction section closes this loop and is well written. The draft is ready to go, but I have one small editorial comment. In Section 5 (IANA Considerations), the first table there has a references column, and the text currently says "[[This Document", and should probably be changed to "[[This Document]]", to match the rest of the draft. Thanks Sarah
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