Re: [Last-Call] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-iana-class-type-yang-02

Ladislav Lhotka <ladislav.lhotka@nic.cz> Fri, 14 May 2021 12:42 UTC

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From: Ladislav Lhotka <ladislav.lhotka@nic.cz>
To: Valery Smyslov <valery@smyslov.net>, secdir@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] Secdir last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-iana-class-type-yang-02
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Valery Smyslov via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> writes:

> Reviewer: Valery Smyslov
> Review result: Ready
>
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's 
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the 
> IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the 
> security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat 
> these comments just like any other last call comments.
>
> The document defines how IANA assigned values in two DNS registries
> (DNS CLASSes and Resource Record TYPEs) are to be translated into
> YANG enumerations, so that they can be later used in defining
> YANG modules modelling DNS configuration.
>
> The document introduces no new technology or protocol
> and only defines a one-to-one translation of IANA assigned values
> to YANG enumerations. 
>
> Nits:
> I think that RFC 8174 should also be referenced (along with RFC 2119).
>
Updated, thanks.

Lada

>

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