[Last-Call] Re: draft-ietf-iotops-7228bis-07 ietf last call Tsvart review
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From: Marcus Ihlar <marcus.ihlar@ericsson.com>
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Hi Carsten, Thank you for addressing the comments, and the pointers to the PRs! It looks all good from my perspective now. -----Original Message----- From: Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> Sent: Tuesday, 12 May 2026 10:59 To: Marcus Ihlar <marcus.ihlar@ericsson.com> Cc: tsv-art@ietf.org; draft-ietf-iotops-7228bis.all@ietf.org; iotops@ietf.org; last-call@ietf.org Subject: Re: [Last-Call] draft-ietf-iotops-7228bis-07 ietf last call Tsvart review Hi Marcus, thank you for your review, and particularly for the concrete, actionable suggestions. We have prepared (and merged) PRs #19 (clarifying our use of MSL) and #20: https://github.com/lwig-wg/terminology/pull/19 https://github.com/lwig-wg/terminology/pull/20 You can see the changes in the context of all the IETF last-call related changes at https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/iddiff?doc_1=draft-ietf-iotops-7228bis&url_2=https://lwig-wg.github.io/terminology/draft-ietf-iotops-7228bis.txt Of course, IESG processing continues, so any further comments are welcome. Grüße, Carsten
- [Last-Call] draft-ietf-iotops-7228bis-07 ietf las… Marcus Ihlar via Datatracker
- [Last-Call] Re: draft-ietf-iotops-7228bis-07 ietf… Carsten Bormann
- [Last-Call] Re: draft-ietf-iotops-7228bis-07 ietf… Marcus Ihlar