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Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-crocker-inreply-react-07

Dave Crocker <dcrocker@bbiw.net> Mon, 01 February 2021 22:26 UTC

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To: Ned Freed <ned.freed@mrochek.com>
Cc: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>, Dale Worley <worley@ariadne.com>, draft-crocker-inreply-react.all@ietf.org, gen-art@ietf.org, last-call@ietf.org
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From: Dave Crocker <dcrocker@bbiw.net>
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-crocker-inreply-react-07
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On 1/30/2021 3:13 PM, Ned Freed wrote:
> Finally, I think a couple of word choices could be better. So how about:

Having seen no objections, I've replaced the draft's existing text with 
Ned's proposed alternative.

d/

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Dave Crocker
Brandenburg InternetWorking
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