[Last-Call] Re: draft-ietf-ivy-network-inventory-topology-11 ietf last call Genart review

"Wubo (lana)" <lana.wubo@huawei.com> Tue, 20 October 2026 09:41 UTC

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Hi Russ,

Thank you for the review. We will address all the points in the next version.
Here is the latest version update:
https://author-tools.ietf.org/api/iddiff?doc_1=draft-ietf-ivy-network-inventory-topology&url_2=https://ietf-ivy-wg.github.io/network-inventory-topology/draft-ietf-ivy-network-inventory-topology.txt

Please also see inline.

Thanks,
Bo

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Document: draft-ietf-ivy-network-inventory-topology
Title: A YANG Network Data Model for Inventory Topology Mapping
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-ivy-network-inventory-topology-11
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2026-09-16
IETF LC End Date: 2026-09-26
IESG Telechat date: unknown

Summary: Ready

Major Concerns:

None

Minor Concerns:

Section 2: Please merge Section 2 and Section 2.1.
[Bo Wu] Thanks for the suggestion. We have merged the two sections.

Section 6 includes:

Therefore, in typical deployments, "ne-ref", "port-ref", and "link-
type" SHOULD be populated through automatic discovery but MAY only be
overridden manually in exceptional cases (e.g., CPE, leased lines, or
planned resources).

The phrase "MAY only" seems to contradict the ususal definition of MAY.
I suggest dropping "only" from the sentence.

[Bo Wu] Agreed. The word "only" has been dropped.

Nits:

Section 7: s/no particularly sensitive RPC/no sensitive RPC/
[Bo Wu] Fixed.

Thank you again for the review.

Best regards,
Bo (on behalf of the authors)

[Last-Call] draft-ietf-ivy-network-inventory-topo… Russ Housley via Datatracker
[Last-Call] Re: draft-ietf-ivy-network-inventory-… Wubo (lana)