Re: [Last-Call] [dnsdir] Dnsdir last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping-08

Jim Reid <jim@rfc1035.com> Thu, 18 April 2024 23:08 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] [dnsdir] Dnsdir last call review of draft-ietf-dnsop-dnssec-bootstrapping-08
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> On 18 Apr 2024, at 15:36, Scott Rose via Datatracker via dnsdir <dnsdir@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Scott Rose
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I believe the draft is ready, with a minor typo/nit that don't change the document:
> 
> In Section 5.1 second paragraph has "Signaling Zone" while other instances are "signaling zone”.

Many thanks Scott.

IMO “signalling” would be even better. OED spelling y’see. :-)