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[Last-Call] [babel] Last Call: <draft-ietf-babel-information-model-11.txt> (Babel Information Model) to Informational RFC

Antonin Décimo <antonin.decimo@gmail.com> Tue, 20 October 2020 10:32 UTC

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From: Antonin Décimo <antonin.decimo@gmail.com>
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Date: Tue, 20 Oct 2020 12:23:51 +0200
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Subject: [Last-Call] [babel] Last Call: <draft-ietf-babel-information-model-11.txt> (Babel Information Model) to Informational RFC
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Hello,

I believe there’s a little inconsistency in the Babel Information
Model draft, v11.

The name for 'babel-if-mac-key-sets' is not used consistently in the
document. It seems like the correct name to me.

- in 2 and 3.3 (page 9) it is spelled 'babel-if-mac-key-sets';
- in 3.3 (page 10), it is spelled 'babel-if-mac-keys-sets';
- in 3.7 (page 15), it is spelled 'babel-interface-mac-keys'.

Best regards,

-- Antonin Décimo

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