Re: [Last-Call] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-jmap-sharing-07

Neil Jenkins <neilj@fastmailteam.com> Thu, 18 April 2024 06:08 UTC

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Date: Thu, 18 Apr 2024 16:07:25 +1000
From: Neil Jenkins <neilj@fastmailteam.com>
To: Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@futurewei.com>, "ops-dir@ietf.org" <ops-dir@ietf.org>
Cc: "draft-ietf-jmap-sharing.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-jmap-sharing.all@ietf.org>, IETF JMAP Mailing List <jmap@ietf.org>, "last-call@ietf.org" <last-call@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-jmap-sharing-07
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Hi Linda,

I've updated the introduction <https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-jmap-sharing-09.html#name-denial-of-service> at the beginning of the document to read:

JMAP ([RFC8620 <https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-jmap-sharing-08.html#RFC8620>] JSON Meta Application Protocol) is a generic protocol for synchronizing data, such as mail, calendars or contacts, between a client and a server. It is optimized for mobile and web environments, and provides a consistent interface to query, read, and modify different data types, including comprehensive error handling.

Cheers,
Neil.