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Eliot Lear <lear@lear.ch> Fri, 30 October 2026 13:39 UTC

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My apologies,  This is a corrected review (I entered the wrong review for this draft).

Ready with nits

This draft is reasonably well written and well specified.

I have just two comments:

* Be careful about your use of the term client and server; I would not use those terms
   without qualification; eg., "ACME client" or "DNS client".

* I think it would be helpful to show a flow diagram of the exchange.  AI might be useful
   to get you there.  If it can't that probably tells you something.

Best regards,

Eliot

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