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Re: [Last-Call] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-httpapi-rfc7807bis-04

Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net> Fri, 04 November 2022 09:24 UTC

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From: Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>
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Subject: Re: [Last-Call] Artart last call review of draft-ietf-httpapi-rfc7807bis-04
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Hi Jean,

Thanks! I've recorded these as:
  https://github.com/ietf-wg-httpapi/rfc7807bis/issues/60


> On 3 Nov 2022, at 8:43 pm, Jean Mahoney via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Jean Mahoney
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> This document is ready to be published as an RFC. 
> 
> Nits:
> 
> General - RFC7807 / RFC 7807 (when used in prose)
> 
> Section 3.1.3 - The entire section is bold in the HTML output.
> 
>   Current:  The "title" string is advisory, and is included only 
>             for users who both are not aware of ...
> 
>   Perhaps: The "title" string is advisory and is included only 
>            for users who are both unaware of ...
> 
> Section 3.2 - a "errors" extension / an "errors" extension
> 
> Section 7 - IANA prefers that a registry name not include "Registry" 
> 
> Current: "HTTP Problem Types Registry"
> 
> Perhaps: "HTTP Problem Types" registry
> 
> 
> 
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> 

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